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The Betty McCloud
Collection, Series one -

Below Bars

Betty Drives On

Bullies Never Learn

The Corrisville Barbecue
Washout

Travers Track

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A warm welcome to you,  I'm Brian Cross, a writer from

Peterborough,  United Kingdom. Please look around my site.  

Included you will find the opening chapters of my new novel,

Stormfly, now available for purchase at £7.99. Orders can be

placed by mailing me at briancross@briancross.net

Soon to be completed, my latest offering 'Castle In The Clouds.'

Read about it on this page.

There are extracts from my two previously published novels,

Snowbird, and The Scarlet Web. Also included are a variety of

short stories  and my Betty McCloud Collection, series one.
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Shelley Summers is sixteen when she is
subjected to a serious sexual assault in a London
underpass, the repercussions of which are to have
a lasting effect.

Ten years later, she is working as a journalist for a
nationwide magazine when she meets a senior
detective who is investigating a series of murders,
committed, he believes, by the same person.

The deeper Mike Eveson's investigations go, the
more he is forced to a troublesome conclusion,
that the woman who is responsible for the
murders is the very same one he has fallen for:
Shelley Summers.

But is he right?
A Barrel Of Rum
                          Castle
                        In
                The Clouds


Early in the twentieth century a
wealthy banker buys a sixteenth
century castle off the
Northumberland coast.  He has
bought it as an asset to wine and
dine his rich and influential clients.
But a shipwreck and a beautiful
violinist change his plans. He
comes to see things from a
different perspective, for she is his
ideal woman. Thomas Llewellyn
carries her in his heart and in his
head night and day. He can think
of nothing else. For him, life in the
castle with his lovely Veronica
means the fulfilment  of a dream
that took shape the first day he
saw her.
But he has a devious sister to
contend with, a mysterious
gardener with a secret, and what
of  Veronica Day - is she able to
return his feelings.

You can read Chapter One,
opposite.
                        
  
                                               Castle In The Clouds
                                            
                                             Early Twentieth Century

                             An Island off of the Northumberland Coast

                                                      Chapter One

   To Thomas Llewellyn's unaccustomed ears the sudden noise sounded like a
firework cracking the May air, disturbing the peace of an island and the small
sixteenth century castle he'd bought. It seemed idyllic, he hadn't counted on
unruly elements shattering the rustic charm.
   But then striding along the castle's upper gallery and glancing through a
window, Llewellyn saw the reason for the disturbance, as an orange flare from a
sea-going vessel ripped through the grey sky.
   He trod a flight of stairs, opening an oak door leading onto a former gun battery
which now provided a roof garden with a spectacular panorama.
   But it was the sight of the sinking ship which caught his eye.
   Viewed from a distance it seemed small, its stern largely submerged in the high
seas while the bow appeared marooned above them; and then as a klaxon
sounded repeatedly he watched the island's lifeboat crew assemble before
setting out to sea.
   Llewellyn felt a hand on his shoulder and smelled his sister's cologne blasting
across his nose. 'Is this what possessed you to buy the place Thomas? So that
you could watch real life dramas unfold? No theatre can adequately portray the
real thing, isn't that a fact? Prey - let us take a seat and watch.'
   'Shame on me that I should ever consider such a thing, shame on you that you
actually propose it.' Llewellyn removed his sister's heavily jewelled wrist, 'Come
Dorothea, if there is nothing we can do to assist, there is little point in witnessing
some wretched soul's demise - we shall go inside.'
   'Do so if you wish Thomas, but you are not my keeper,nor am I one of your City
pawns.' Dorothea gave Llewellyn a defiant, dark-eyed stare. 'I intend to watch the
show unfold.'
   Llewellyn met that stare momentarily; dressed in her black cape, its hood
veiling her dark curly hair, her prominent nose the only distinctive feature,
Dorothea seemed every inch the sorceress. There were times when her support
was invaluable, but there were occasions when her behaviour was insufferable.
Such a time was now.
   Llewellyn closed the door on her, took the gallery steps and made his way
down to the lounge where he stood by a Gothic window and stared out across
the island, surveying the scenery, wild now in the developing storm. He reflected
on his decision to purchase the castle as a second home, and how it would fare
under the auspices of his sister, to whom he'd entrusted the day to day
supervision.
   The plan was for Dorothea to manage his staff of three which consisted of
David Hambleton, the butler, who had made the move from London to undertake
the task, Mrs. Simms, who had been recruited from amongst the Northumberland
island's residents as cook, along with John Gibbings, the young gardener cum
handyman, who he'd been assured was both a gifted gardener and industrious
worker.
   The acquisition had been at considerable expense, but as a prominent banker it
provided him with a prestigious residence to dine, accommodate and impress his
influential clients. They could not fail to be so.
   With the wind buffeting its stout walls Llewellyn commenced a routine evening
inspection of a castle that had been expertly redesigned by a leading architect to
resemble a fortified house. Its many rooms were mainly small in nature and
encouraged intimacy, but the castle also contained areas where entertainment
could be provided for important guests.
   Llewellyn was examining the wide entrance hall, with its exposed pillars and
red herringbone stone floor, when he heard Dorothea's hurried footsteps behind
him -
   'Thomas - our drama appears to have been played out with success - come,
witness a happy ending.'
   Llewellyn shook his head, but nonetheless allowed Dorothea to snatch his
hand and lead him back to the roof garden - 'Behold, a fair maiden is rescued -'
   He followed his sister to the parapet; below on the shores, visible in the fading
evening light the lifeboat had come ashore. And embarking from it, shawl
wrapped around her shoulders and supported by four boatmen was a tall, slim
woman. As Llewellyn watched, for a second the setting sun slipped behind racing
clouds and reflected her long, red hair.
   The wind whipped that hair around her face and as she swept it back he saw
her profile. Her face was full and healthy looking, and the straight nose gave her a
refined look; he could see at once her elegance and class.
   Dorothea watched his chest swell. 'Fair takes your breath away, does she
brother? Can she be that pretty?
   'It was the wind, nothing more,' Llewellyn said, aware that his reply had been
curt. 'I was merely curious.'
   Dorothea said nothing further as Llewellyn returned inside, but her eyes
followed the party all the way to the village.